thank you so much for the help!

i know my organization is a little screwed up.. like I want to seperate certain things but in order to do that I would have to remove a lot out of the essay since it can only be a page long. therefore I was kind of forced to squash more than one topic into a paragraph. and now I can't be content on taking anything out lol. but my teacher posted some former student's essays that she liked and they did the same thing so I'm probably not gonna worry about it too much.

but yeah thank you I'm trying to think of something a little more attention grabbing to start the essay with. beginnings always seem to be the hardest part for me. and I will also try to extend my conclusion a bit, and maybe add a few similes/metaphors here and there since the directions said to do so.

:) thanks again. i'd send you the final but it probably won't be too different haha

lol yes yay fits very well :)
i'm a jr too, i've never changed schools
before though so goodluck with that i hope it goes well
sounds kinda sucky though, i'm sorry :/
eh sounds like everything is kinda iffy, i know how that goes
hopefully it all gets better in time.
i hope you find a cool color for your hair
<3 amanda

Aw, you're so lucky!!

I get out on May 20th officially, but since we're spending about 10 days in NY (again) next year (only this time it's the middle of May instead of late July/early August) I need to do like a week's worth of work before it's supposed to be done. Or I can just double up and graduate in April. XDD

Actually, I'm not a freshman, I'm an 8th grader. My homeschooling program is advanced, so I'm doing freshman work. And I skipped a grade, sooooo I'm only 12. Don't tell anyone that though *shh*. lol

Anyways. Yes, the shrimp were good, until they were coated with soda. My dad didn't seem to mind though. And I figured the soda thing would be funny, I don't think it'll ever happen again.

Good luck on your martial arts findings! Last night I went to a local hangout place and they were having a talent show, so I signed up, did a Tang Soo Do form, and won 3rd place!

Ohh, I see~ Thanks for the info. =^.^=

I read your diary, you seem like a really interesting person.

Tang Soo Do is kind of a child form of Tae Kwon Do. Google does wonders, if you're curious about it. It's pretty cool, and it only costs $35 a month.

Sorry you took it that way but if u didnt wanna know then dont leave it open.

I really wasnt trying to be mean or a bitch. I just dont like reading gils f***ing up their lifes. Its none of my business I know but its just i have beent here and done that...i was just trying to help. I am really sorry.

I use mine to vent to and i will read any comment and try to understand what they are saying when they leave comments.

I am glad you are learning form your mistakes. It takes a big person to say that.

I wish u the best

Well, you don't have to worry about me getting a jealous girlfriend!

[TaintedHeart02]

Hey
Nice to meet you. Texas would be pretty cool.
Do you like breaking dawn so far? I thought it  was pretty good
I love Edward, just a little too much  

feel free to chat to me anytime
love Litlle Do You Know

P.S I LOVE your name! I always wanted to be called Jade...just thought I'd randomly say that. Lol

"I know you're stronger than that, Jade. Don't ever say you can't tell a person 'no'."

What he said!!!  Hes completely right.

No, it doesn't freak me out! It almost made me blush. Hehe. I feel exactly the same way about you!

Don't get me wrong, you are freaky in other ways....  *hides behind Ulrich* Kidding, kidding!!!

OHH.

And not really...I just plan on being more active, and eating healthier. I know if I try really hard, I'll get something out of it!

And you're right. The whole 'just friends' thing is hard on me & him but it's working out well. I mean sometimes we slip and like kiss or something but it's nice being able to talk to him as a friend.

300 ?
isnt that a little bit ? lol

Thanks =) And yeah, it'd be alot easier for me if I lived in a nice clean house with hot water. but my parents have trouble paying the bills.

OMG YOU LIKE CODE LYOKO!? I LOVE THAT SHOW!!! I haven't seen it in FOREVER though ;-;

And yeah I used to have to tell John that I wanted him to live on for me, not die.

*sighs*

I'm getting lazier and lazier! Time to take some action! As soon as I do laundry! lol XD

-Anna

It's alright. Things worked out I guess. [explains in diary]

Well, suicidal romance as in...we would die for one another. Plus he is like really emotional and thinks about suicide ALOT. He would kill himself for me, I'd kill myself for him.

All that dramatic, crazy stuff.

And for anime...I like shows like Naruto, Death Note, Inuyasha, Bleach, Blood+, Eureka 7...lot's of others.

^^

And I hope you reach your goal! Good luck!

All I've been doing is being lazy and pigging out -_-

Any tips on how to get yourself up and motivated..?

<33 Anna

Wow...you DO sound alot like me! O.O Okay, so, for this school year I have been trying to eat less because I really need to lose weight because I'm gaining it. When I go school shopping I want to buy smaller clothes too! Plus, I've been thinking about exercising...whoa :]

Goodluck!

[Annasaur]

sounds like a good idea:)

-peyton.<3

Jade whats wrong?  Sorry I wasn't on. I was going to the movies and stuff with my grandma. I'm usually on.... all day and night actually. But my grandpa went out of town, so me and my grandma might be out a lot...

I'm doing good. I'm getting back into a good sleeping pattern. 

When I'm in Ohio, I'm almost never alone, so I haven't beem able to smoke since I got here like a month ago, and I'm reeeeaaalllly craving a cigarette, but thats about the only thing wrong with me right now.

Jade, I've seen your pictures on myspace. Theres absolutely nothing wrong with you. Your shoulders are fine, and you don't need to lose a pound. Seriously. Ulrich agrees with me.

haha thanks so much.
i get my hair cut at a place called sheer envy
but i doubt you live near me haha.
sorry =[.

C.

1.  13

2.  7

3.   Codey

4.   Jade

5.   Kim (my mom)

6.   Linda (my grandma)

8.   Imaginary

9.   Bleed

10. Everybodys fool

11.  The only one

So, not everything was right, like me loving Codey, and liking Josh as more than a friend.  What were your results?

I wish I could say everything will be okay, I'm fine, but I can't. I don't know if everything will be okay, and right now, I'm anything but fine. and I would tell you not to worry about me, but I know you will. But you shouldn't worry.

Thats one of the things that bothers me the most... I really have no reason to be this depressed right now. I'm doing much better in school now, things aren't any worse at home than normal... I just don't know.

Love you

We want you back too! We miss you so much!!

Aww thankies for the great comment, its ok if I dont know you or vice versa, I love comments and I dont think I am pretty but thankies

Lulu  xx